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@ Wednesday, 11. Feb, 2009 – 20:08:20
Get me spuds she said
Don't forget a loaf of bread,
Oh, some milk as well
Otherwise you'll burn in hell.
A bit of cake
Just something sweet,
Now hurry up
Don't drag your feet.
Like a ghost
To haunt the aisles,
I seek in vain
And trudge for miles.
On and on
My list forgot,
Must buy something
But know not what.
Just like a man
A cunning plan,
To save my life
-Fib to my wife.
Returning home
With every penny,
Mumbling that they
Didn't have any.
sweetymon
adamantixx
thanks Mon, i think writing that poem has finally got my shopping phobia off my chest x
faffajane
Pro Typical 
adamantixx
i'd bet a tenner the old man has used the self-same excuse to you on several occasions hun 
faffajane
Pro Aye he has 
la_spice
Great!!!! encore!!!
adamantixx
thanks hun...isn't writing verse a tiring business!
la_spice
You need a poetic hug!
There, there! 
adamantixx
thanks, i feel so much better after that x
menhir
I'm amazed you didn't remember the 'something sweet'... tut,tut.
You might be a candidate for a memory test if you continue to publicly declare your cellular inadequacy.
Now where did I put the computer 
adamantixx
it's something about grocery stores and supermarkets in particular, send me to a book shop and i'm fine!
if i'm already this daft at 45 then God help me when i'm 85 eh?
menhir
I can't tell you about 85..............
adamantixx
it's probably best not to know, anyway.
menhir
On a more serious note, I tend to agree.
brokendownangel
Pro fAB - MADE ME SMILE
adamantixx
thanks hun but i blame YOU for my memory loss...
if i hadn't had that glimpse of your knicker-drawer...
brokendownangel
Pro Oh and i thought it was just cos u is a man and can only do one thing at a time and woz prob lookin at the checkout girl and not thinkin of the food??
adamantixx
well, to tell the truth,
there have been times when i checked-out the checkout girl rather too much and became distracted...
by mistake i purchased 2 huge melons
brokendownangel
Pro pmsl
Way To Go hunny..Told ya you could do it xx
adamantixx
yes, i struggled there in the end, hun!
next time i'll write about something more enchanting...
Liz McDonald's cleavage or something
You did good hun
Hmmm.. A poem about clevage.. Sounds good to me.. If you need any inspiration.. Ya know where I am 
xx
adamantixx
thank-you my dear,
i'm sure to find plenty of inspiration by gazing down your magnificent cleavage!
the lower-cut the top, the more inspired i become
I had this fab top once...Split almost down to me belly button..But that was when my boobs were in the right place xx
adamantixx
i just adore tops like that!
i reckon you'd still look fab in it, hun x
I might..Along with plenty of tit tape and padding x
adamantixx
you'll only need what Mother Nature gave you, hun,
nothing can improve on perfection of course
I agree..But me and Mother Nature are not friend's...She did'nt give me alot
adamantixx
...but what she did give you...WOW!
eh?
Ya reckon LOL ... Mind you..Just got back from the pub..And was being eyed up..Now trust me..that don't happen often
adamantixx
it's just that you don't notice often...there's a big difference between the two, hun x
Yeh..I s'pose ya right ! There was no mistaking it tonight..But the tight git did'nt even offer me a drink
adamantixx
not much of a gentleman then huh?
you'd think he'd have the decency to try and get you plastered
Oh look how just like them
they think that they can fool the femme
you know there really is no way
It doesn't matter what you say.
We fix you with a beady stare
you cringe just like a frightened hare
We know your ploys and all your wiles
we are not fooled by your sheepish smiles
So tomorrow when you come home
Just remember go and roam
around the most expensive florist shop
then armed with roses to the floor you drop
Saying, Oh my love please forgive
Without your instructions I cannot live
I make a mess of everything
Except the day i married you and you made my poor heart sing
adamantixx
fantastic!!!
thank-you so much for sharing this little epic...
it puts my own efforts very much in the dark and it's packed with life's simple truths from the first word to the last x
WhiteWave
Great poem Adamantix xx wonder where the inspiration came from 
adamantixx
we find our daily inspiration in the strangest places and things, hun, we never know what's coming next x
Devilish_Jelly_Beanz
heheheh that was good
adamantixx
thanks hun, i'm glad you enjoyed reading it
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Great poem!
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