I lonely, cold, walk the sands by night
Despairing sounds rise to meet these ears,
A mermaid huddled upon a rock
Moonlight sees her falling tears.
So sorrowful yet sweet that sobbing
The vision of beauty beguiling me,
No speech i uttered, i stood and watched
That weeping daughter of the sea.
Advance a step, hold out a hand
A tiny comfort to her from me,
She sees me now and blushes bright
Vanishes back into the sea.
That eve it haunts my every dream
So vivid still her seaswept charms,
My life complete if i could but once
Hold that mermaid in my arms.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:49:12
thank-you Sussie, it took me ages!
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 04:04:07
Hmmmmmmm. A very interesting thread indeed....
Thank you for the poem. I think it's great that you're posting these.
And what an interesting thread it's turned out to be, too. Ah, the sheer romance of it all....
So long,
win3xp of FunFlight: New York
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 13:31:13
a day is always brightened by a little romance, i'm pleased that you're enjoying your visits

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:45:24
You were spying on me!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:51:24
notice how i retained your anonymity by using your pic in silhouette, your comments the other night made me write it!
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:53:44
Bless you

Why oh why didn't I find you years ago (before you got married!)
C'est la vie
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:55:45
you must have been sitting on the wrong rocks, i'm sure i would have noticed you if you'd been at my beach!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:57:24
Damn!
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:02:10
never give up singing the song of the siren, you'll ensnare someone soon!
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:03:45
I'm sure "my man" is being held captive by someone else because I can't find him anywhere

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:05:22
i suspect that the only man worthy of you would be King Neptune himself!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:08:10
You haven;t got his phone number or email address by anty chance? Have you.....?
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:10:06
sorry i haven't but i'll ask him for it when we're next sharing a pint in the local, he enjoys a quick tipple, (between you and me)
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:11:30
Good man!
mmmm that is what I need a good man
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:13:49
knowing your nautical preferences, the only other man i can suggest is Captain Birdseye!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:14:41
No no no! Too old and a beardy! Not my type

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:20:32
aha! i know! how about young Horatio Hornblower? remember that series? bet you wouldn't mind him..?
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:23:15
I want a REAL man!!!
Meanwhile I shall just sit here all spinster-like..
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:27:13
awww now i've got this sad mental picture of a poor, disconsolate mermaid stranded on a welsh mountain, very disturbing

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:29:43
No no not on a mountain! Sunday I shall be out at sea - the Irish sea, my long red hair flying in the wind and my spirits will soar - for a small time at least

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:33:19
that sounds great! sunday will be lovely, do you have your own boat or are you going for a very chilly swim?

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:36:31
I am sailing with some friends and then having a farewell drink with one of them as he is away out to the Caspian Sea Sunday (15th Oct) and it will be a very long time before I will see him again.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:41:55
well i hope you enjoy every minute of the day and that he leaves with very happy memories of sundays adventure. have a drink for me!
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:43:54
I shall think of you as I raise a glass

Nite nite,
Wcg xx-
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:46:29
cheers and good health! bottoms up even! nitey nite x
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:47:18
LOL!
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:49:18
I don't remember Southsea looking like //that!//

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:52:52
mermaids don't like the noisy old funfair so i had to go along the coast a bit!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:56:39
Ah. quite understandable.. I was quite often woken up by the overly loud arcade noises.

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:00:23
...not to mention the deafening roar from Fratton Park every time we scored!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:01:58
I was //usually// awake by then

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:03:58
awake and busy shopping i expect!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:08:32
Hmm you're probably right.. either that or still wandering around in my pyjamas

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:12:31
your pyjamas were undoubtedly ones with cute little pictures on but i can't decide between winnie the pooh, my little pony, barbie or power rangers
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:16:17
well if they're the only options then it would've been Barbie.. ah yes.. wandering around my halls of residence in //Barbie// PJs.. !!! I would've got very odd looks...

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:22:07
they'd have been envious looks from the other girls who weren't brave enough to bring their own barbie pj's with them!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:26:29
We should all be thankful that the Barbie PJs don't actually exist

I mean, what would Mr Mendes think of them!
(Ah, you know i needed to mention him)
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:31:34
i'm not too sure how he views barbie pj's but i think he'd find you adorable anyway! (he's told me as much, in complete confidence)
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:34:48
aww bless him.
Thanks chuck 
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:40:09
you're welcome, he's definately got a soft-spot for you

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:44:44
Unfortunately, it appears he has an even bigger soft spot for Jenni. Boooo.

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:47:35
you mustn't judge the poor man, he's torn between the pair of you!

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:51:35
.. and his wife

Oh well, it never stopped us before i guess.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:59:27
sounds like you have a few confessions to make! hehe
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:02:59
nope

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:09:23
a clean conscience then, good!

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:14:19
well not exactly but. ah forget it. mixing realities is not a good idea

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:21:29
a good friend knows when to ask no further! your secrets must remain secret!

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:27:32
haha.. like i have such secrets

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:33:17
of course, you little angel! i'm off to bed now, nitey nite x
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 00:37:44
nightie

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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:50:57
You turned out to be good poet adam. Show it your boss, he will also like it I guess.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 22:54:12
thanks vox, you're very kind...though i think the poetry my boss prefers is profit-sheets and suchlike.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:22:03
Hope your desire to 'hold that mermaid in your arms' comes true some day.
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:25:49
yes, it would be very nice for me even if it only happens the once!
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- Tuesday, 17. Oct, 2006 @ 22:10:44
So not more than once, Adam you suggest?
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- Tuesday, 17. Oct, 2006 @ 22:18:01
more than once would be asking too much of an idle dream, what a pleasant thought though!
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That's beautiful
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- Friday, 06. Oct, 2006 @ 23:58:20
people have called me many things over the years, i answer to them all lol glad you liked my little poem x
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 04:00:16
Beautiful! Yet theres a sense of saddness somewhere. If there is, dun feel sad bro. Someday you will be holding one in your arms! =)
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 13:28:04
thanks for your kind words xiang, its true that we must have our little dreams in order for any to come true

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 22:53:41
aaaaahhhh.....but that's lovely! You old romantic you...aaahh. Well done for writing that, I wish I could write pomes - good pomes that is.
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:08:18
thank-you and i also hope that me and that mermaid meet again one starry night *sigh*
i try to hide my soppier side when i can but it tends to seep out when i'm feeling like a bit of verse! lol-
- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:16:42
It's good to have a soppy side!

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:19:18
i know, but my soppy side is well hidden behind my sloppy side

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:28:59
aaahhhh.....I have a sloppy side too....and a stroppy side...I used to be a dodecahedron....that has a lot of sides but now I've even more....
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:34:12
i don't even know how many sides i have, i do know that i split a lot of them when someone told me a joke once...
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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:50:54
that poor haddock came to a sticky end earlier, i forgot to tell you, he was out drinking with mates and got involved in a punch-up with some halibut...he ended up being battered

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- Saturday, 07. Oct, 2006 @ 23:55:35
oh no!! And he went through so much! After all that....and the aspirin....and everything....Oh he lived a bold and brave life....(sheds a tear)...

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- Sunday, 08. Oct, 2006 @ 00:00:32
looking on the bright side, he's now made lots of new friends, a lovely little family called the Chips!

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- Sunday, 08. Oct, 2006 @ 00:04:18
oh that's nice, they live in St.Omach dont they??

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- Sunday, 08. Oct, 2006 @ 12:42:44
they sure do! i'm particularly fond of them myself

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- Saturday, 05. Apr, 2008 @ 13:29:09
Much like sirens, mermaids in stories would sometimes sing to sailors and enchant them, distracting them from their work and causing them to walk off the deck or cause shipwrecks.
The blog owner changed this comment on Saturday, 05. Apr, 2008 20:46:41
Adam, that is lovely.